Autobiography Writing

I was born in 2003 October 13th in Saints Mary’s Hospital.I went to Wyvil Primary School when I was three years old.WhenI was in year 4 I went to Brazil for a holiday and to see my cousins also my grandma and my sister. I stayed for 3 mouths there because my sister had to go under operation inaddtion to that I went to a villa that my grandma brought after my sister got better.After a couple weeks I returned to London. A few days pasted by and I returned to school.Afterwards my sister came back to London. Mounths pasted by when suddenly my grandma called saying my cousin was in a bike accident while driving his bike at night. He spent a month in Hospital.After a month he got a lot better and went back to his house.When I was in year 5 my grandma came to visit my mum,my sister and I.she stayed until Christmas then went back to Brazil.Now I’m  at London nautical.

1 Comment

  1. Brian,

    A good start and I am pleased to see you giving this a go. The badge criteria are right here if you need them:

    http://achieve.community.edutronic.net/stage-one-writing/autobiography-3/

    Good luck!

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